Change.

Have the opportunity to ask more people about my subject. I think that the more information that you have on the subject the more you have to write about them. I also wish I understood what way I wanted to write the profile essay. I kept switching and at one point I thought I was writing a personal essay again. I just need to work on not having my mind everywhere and focus on the one thing that I want to write about.

The other thing is that I wish I would have written about someone else. Don't get me wrong I love what I wrote about and who but I wish I could have wrote about a person. Someone I didn't know too much about. I did discover that I didn't know the person as well as I thought and that is why I am grateful for the opportunity to write about my dad and the opportunity to search deep in his soul and in mine.